Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is clearly noticed that nowadays are more different than the past due to many factors. I personally believe that our lifestyle in the present is much easier than in the past. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore more in the following essay.
To begin with, technology development has shown a rapid pace changes in our lifestyle. These changes with many varieties has made our life much easier and more comfortable. For example, traveling to see beloved ones who live far away from your town. With the presence of new technologies development, travelling is now not necessary with presence of video calls. Thus, this would lead to make our lifestyle much comfortable than it was. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I remembered when I was a kid, we travelled to see our aunt who live in a different city. Nowadays, we just call her via video call apps and ask about her.
Furthermore, this technologies development has evolved with our lifestyle in majority of our routines. For example, in the past our grandparents have to go to shops in order to buy anything. However, imagine if that shop place does not have an important item that you need, thus you must wait couple of months. Nowadays, online shopping has a significant effect on our lifestyles. I remembered that one day my grandmother told me about her suffering of waiting for an important medicine. I showed her how easy I ordered her medicine, and she expressed her impressed feelings without saying a word.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that our lifestyle nowadays is much comfortable and easier than in the past. This because the development that human being has achieved such as technology which has affected our lifestyle significantly in many different ways such as online shopping and presence of new technology.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...from your town With the presence of new technologies development travelling is now not neces...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...pps and ask about her Furthermore this technologies development has evolved with our lifest...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...impressed feelings without saying a word In conclusion I strongly feel that our l...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...affected our lifestyle significantly in many different ways such as online shopping and presen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7957824636 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 310.0 20.1344086022 1540% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1490.0 100.406767564 1484% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 310.0 20.6045352989 1505% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 94.0 5.45110844103 1724% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180693756841 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180693756841 0.076458572812 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115705735318 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308356528836 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 156.2 11.7677419355 1327% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -243.17 58.1214874552 -418% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 124.2 10.1575268817 1223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.97 8.01818996416 274% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.0 10.0537634409 1253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 126.0 10.247311828 1230% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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