Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
My grandparents lived in a time that there were no cars available, no phones to use, and no apartments to live in. Therefore, I strongly believe that life today is easier and more comfortable.Comparing to that time, now we are living in a era that has technological and medical advancements.
First and foremost, people today are able to communicate with others and travel to one place to another in a shorter amount of time. With the help of the development of the technology, we have cellphones, and various types of vehicles to drive from place to place. For example, my grandfather said that people used to communicate with written letters and needed to wait for at least a month to receive the letter’s response. In contrast , we use video calls, and text messages to communicate with each other and wait only couple of seconds to receive its reply. Furthermore, in the past, horse was the only type of transportation; but now people have automobiles that help them to save time and to travel way more faster than the horses.
Not only technology, but also we have more advanced medical care. In 21st century, we can cure many types of diseases that were once incurable, such as tuberculosis. Now we have antibiotics and other medicines to cure the diseases, hospitals now have more advanced technologies to detect the diseases, and we can prevent from health issues in many ways now. However, some diseases,which are now curable, were terminal when my grandparents were children. For instance, chickenpox, a disease that can be easily cured now, caused millions of people to die when they were young.
Overall, it can be reasonably seen that the life today is way more better than the past times, according to the reasons I explored above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Comparing
...fe today is easier and more comfortable.Comparing to that time, now we are living in a er...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ring to that time, now we are living in a era that has technological and medical ...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the letter's response. In contrast , we use video calls, and text messages t...
^^
Line 5, column 715, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...elp them to save time and to travel way more faster than the horses. Not only technolo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...in many ways now. However, some diseases,which are now curable, were terminal when my ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...sonably seen that the life today is way more better than the past times, according to the r...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92281879195 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98318760456 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7731447763 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160483312488 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604715531515 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423222794774 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893116007547 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265863887088 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.