Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Every year there are a lot of invention that make our life much easier than before. Personally, I believe that nowadays we are all living in a more comfortable style than our parents lived before. I feel that way for two importany reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, automobiles become available everywhere, which means that any one of current generation is able either to by a car or to ride a bus in order to arrieve the destination more easliy. In contrast, is the past if any one wanted to travel to another city there were only camels or horses which made their life harsh. my father story is a compelling example of what I mean, one day we bought a car and I decided to take him to Saudia Arabia to do haj, it took us approximaly twenty hours untill we arrived. my father told me that when his dad decided to visit makah, he spent three months because he rode a camel and all people at that time were hasitating to travel due to the difficulties that they were expecting to face during their journey. Had the vehicles were avilable at my grandfather generation, everyone would go to pray in makah.
Moreover, the science has been developing tremondously all over the world all of that aiming in improving our lifestyle. the developing counteries spending millions of dollars in reasearch to discover a new medications for a disease that caused death for myriad of people in the past. For instance, there was a disease that spread in my country three decades ago. no one know what was that and how to treat it. In contrast, recently there is a COVID19 virus that spread all over the world and caused the death for 100 thousands of people. all the countries started to do a reasarch on how to make a vaccine for virus.and soon they will get it and make a medication for the patients. Had the disease present in my granfather time, almost all people would die and no one could know the cause.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, people nowadays are are living in more comfortable lifestyle than before, this was becasue of availablity of automobile and because of science development
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- TPO 45 - w1 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61842105263 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61681516478 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544736842105 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3494041673 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6875 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178853043139 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532372993097 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325997064864 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100904505751 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386615190092 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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