Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
There is no shortage of opinion that why people help others who need someone's help. Nowadays, with the development of modern society, people's attitude towards other people changed, because they are more considerate compared to the past. Many people from around the world are in famine and poverty and it is our priority to help these people. So, I agree with the statement for the following reasons.
First of all, everything changed, including people. In the past, giving something to poor people from one's property was considered a crime, because the system of the ancient society was strict. For example, in ancient Egypt, monarchs, and leaders demanded that poor families be in part of arduous labor and mandated to pay high taxes. However, compared to the past, almost all countries in the world are peaceful and every person has their rights and can say their opinions without any fear. In my country, we have many clubs and social activities, which allow people from every part of the country, regardless of their age and social status, to listen to their opinions and solve their problems. Secondly, people are more compassionate, because they learned to put themselves in other people's shoes. My personal experience is a great example of this. I recently read a book about emotional intelligence and I learned much valuable knowledge. It is stated in the book that empathy is one of the most essential characteristics that people should have because they will never understand other people's opinions or behavior if they do not learn to be considerate to others. When I was in high school, I never respected my classmates' situation, because I was so arrogant and disrespectful. As a result, I became an outsider in my class, even though I was excelled at everything. If I had read this book early, I would have become a more considerate and passionate person.
To sum up, everything is not the same as in the past. We help people in need because they are just as same as everyone. Also, we become more sympathetic and empathetic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89884393064 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7148391294 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7396810737 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292951862611 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889309561785 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875126836328 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224728393282 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797766844446 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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