Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current society, people lead a higher quality of life than they did in the past with the economic prosperous. Some people believe that modern citizens are more willing to lead a hand for the stranger in need, while other hold the opposite view. From where I stand, I agrees with this idea that people living in our era are more gladly to help others in need. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore further in the following essay.
First of all, the expansion of education foster people to share their kindness to strangers. In the past, school education pays more attention on the exams and book knowledge, overlooking the students' moral education. However, with the advent of modern education system, teachers emphasize more moral ideology, such as, showing kindness to others is a great merit. Therefore, people in this era are more willing to display kindness and warmth to other. On the other hand, with the prevalent of education, citizen's literacy realizes a giant leap compared to the past. People will be less alert when making a decision facing someone in need, as people are more civilized and knowledge than they used to be. For example, my grandmother told me she never talked a stranger when she was a kid, as many crimes pretended they were in trouble to deceive the kids. However, in the current era, it is not uncommon that people lend their phone to others urgently need make a call, or chat with a stranger about the his or her trouble them provide some advice. The advance educational level boost the mutual trust, letting all of the changed mentioned above happen.
Secondly, charity career has gradually gained popularity among modern citizen. This is because some social problems are revealed by the social media, attracting people' attention and promoting the charity to overcome those obstacles. My personal experience provides a compelling example. Last year, the exposure of hard living situation of a group of Chinese kids living in a small village caused a intensive response in the society. While some people condemn the useless of local government, others voluntarily donated clothes, food, books, and any other nesscities to those poor kids. In the contrast, people in several decades ago completely could not know such miserable things due to the underdevelopment of Internet and the congestion of information, not mentioning to display kindness to strangers.
In sum, I still hold the view that people in the modern era are more willing to help strangers in need because of the increasing literacy level and the development of information spreading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...he opposite view. From where I stand, I agrees with this idea that people living in ou...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...e a call, or chat with a stranger about the his or her trouble them provide some advice...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...l level boost the mutual trust, letting all of the changed mentioned above happen. Seco...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e kids living in a small village caused a intensive response in the society. Whil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i feel, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00459770115 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60934224105 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554022988506 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3336088145 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.85 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304921390894 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879441310205 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709207405457 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191167129905 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814681925193 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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