With the advancement in technology now internet has become available to almost every individual. Internet has make possible inacessible information avaible to people. Some people thinks that availabilty of this information have made humans life easier while others think that such information have made human life miserable. According to me availabilty of such information will definately make human life much easier,
Earlier due to lack of information people were not able to diagonise the issue they have been facing for health. But now people can search for the issue they are facing on the internet and seek for the proper medical help. For example, when I was in college I was suffering intermittent fever. To cure fever I took medicine but medicine weren't working. I searched online about the fever and related sympotns. After searching for little about the condition I came to conclusion that that sysmptons were because high WBC(White blood cells). So to confirm it I went to hospital and perform medical test. So with just little help from internet I am able to save my money and seek for proper help.
With variety of information available from wide range it is possible it is now easy to analyse information with more sophisticated technology. Wide range of information about customers help buissnessman to deicide the approach for their business. For example, with machine learning approach it is possible to predict customer trend in business and plan the business accordingly.
While such wide information has made life much easier. It is also true that if such information used by wrong people will definelty make human life miserable. However, with advancement in techology, it is possible to protect sensitive inormation from unauthorized people.
In sum, it information is power and it can be used for the betterment for human society. With great power comes great resposibilities. So if information from internet is used with care and responsibilty then it will definelty have positive influence in today's world.
- Professor's appearance on television. 73
- Which kind of movies do you prefer (serious ones that make you think or amusing and entertaining ones)? 70
- Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish. 50
- Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through lar 50
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...e advancement in technology now internet has become available to almost every ind...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rmation have made human life miserable. According to me availabilty of such information will de...
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...cure fever I took medicine but medicine werent working. I searched online about the fe...
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...bout the condition I came to conclusion that that sysmptons were because high WBCWhite bl...
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...re because high WBCWhite blood cells. So to confirm it I went to hospital and per...
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...s and plan the business accordingly. While such wide information has made life muc...
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... sum, it information is power and it can be used for the betterment for human soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24770642202 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88308337679 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501529051988 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0201199399 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106384701418 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371249247655 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447412978986 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752274458613 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507473064986 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.