Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
We live in a word that is covered by the internet and social media so, thinking about its ups and downs is consequential for us. Personally, I believe that the internet has been convenient and beneficial for us. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I sill explore in the following essay.
First of all, with the widespread connection it provides, everybody is connected. I think this is important because we can be aware of the news articles and discoveries in science as soon as they come out. The knowledge is now shared, and everybody can use it. This will make us improve in science at a much faster rate. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Last year my mother's eye had a problem; even though doctors ran lots of tests on her, they couldn't figure out what it was. We didn't give up and went to three other hospitals, but their answer was the same. The last hospital told us to wait and see what happens. Her condition only got worse. After a few months, we went for a checkup. Fortunately, one patient in Canada had the same problem, and their doctors found out what it was. Because of the circumstances, we could not get the exact prescription for My mother, but doctors gave us something with the same ingredient. She used it, and it worked out for her as well.
Furthermore, with the internet, we can see and communicate with each other no matter how much distance we have. With the appearance of skype and telegram, and cellphone, the communication meaning changed. Nowadays, with the help of programs such as telegram and WhatsApp, we can chat with one another at any time. Moreover, with newer programs like skype and Zoom, we can ever see each other. For instance, Last year, my sister and her family moved to Europe. I used to go to their house and see them but know I could not see them face to face for several years, and it could be unbearable for me without the internet. Now we see each other through Skype every other night, and it's pretty much the same as it used to be before she moved. I don't miss her, and she can live wherever she wants without being worry about me.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that the appearance of the internet is hugely beneficial for us and it has changed our world for good. This is because everybody can have access to data, and we are all connected and can communicate with no regard to the distance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: don't
...me as it used to be before she moved. I dont miss her, and she can live wherever she...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50344827586 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55266214509 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2844118321 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3461538462 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7307692308 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901741745099 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279818224905 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284547748355 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583488167138 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014321803445 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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