Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents can be many things for their children e.g. best friends, role model, etc. In my opinion, above all of their roles, the role of teacher is of utmost importance. There are many reasons for my opinion and some of those are explored in the following essay.
To begin with, parents help us in growing as a better individual by sharing their life experience. Our parents helps us to become a better version of ourselves. This is all true in my real life experience, once my mother told me a story about my other which he never told to anyone other than my mother. The story goes back to 1990, when an old lady approached my father while he was at work. She was begging for money. My father talked to that old lady and came to know that she was ostracized by her children from her home and not giving her any allowance for food or anything. After knowing this, my father refused to give her the money but told her that she can eat whatever she wants in the nearby restaurant and he will pay for it. He paid for her food not once but continuously for 5 years until that woman died. This is a very generous deed but despite that he never told anyone. After listening this story from my mother, I learned a life lesson that while being generous to others one should be selfless and should never expect any fame or recognition. This is one of the moral scruples I strictly follow and it helps me to develop as a better human being.
In addition to this, our parents teach us things we use in coping with daily life problems, the things which are not taught in school. A school teacher can only give knowledge about some theoretical subject. This gained knowledge in school is used very rarely in social situations. For example, take calculus, which is taught to every student in school and a student will rarely need in it in to solve real world problems until unless that student is trying to go for higher studies for mathematics. Taking an example from my life, my father taught me shave, he taught me how to use tools, and he taught me how to withdraw money from an ATM machine and many more things. These are very minor things which we never learn in schools and can only be taught by our parents.
In summary, parents are the best teachers one can have. With the help of their shared experience and wisdom, they help us to become a better beings. Moreover, they teach us many banal things which are necessary to face the real world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...taught me how to withdraw money from an ATM machine and many more things. These are very mi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'e.g.', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in summary', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196356275304 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.165991902834 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0728744939271 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425101214575 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.111336032389 0.0685040099705 163% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121457489879 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0351676179071 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.24040067508 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344129554656 0.0309702414327 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.082995951417 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182186234818 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0202429149798 0.0139019557991 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2443.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41685144124 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286031042129 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.166297117517 0.251872472559 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0953436807095 0.174417080927 55% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0532150776053 0.112833075102 47% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.24040067508 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476718403548 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.4139913648 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7916666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3365425849 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.791666667 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 35.4213784183 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.11392405063 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205120086912 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134956474903 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796733030196 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427512412522 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148872060853 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736052433578 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615136291078 0.0781384742642 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251735947498 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621630019918 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161223832937 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541369016333 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.