Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and example to support your answers.
Parents shape their children from the beginning of their children's lives. They develop close emotional ties with their children. They share their interest with them. They teach them values. Parents can be very important teachers in their children's lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.
Parents may be too close to their children emotionally. For example, they may limit a child's freedom in the name of safety. A teacher may organize an educational trip to a big city, but a parent may think this trip is to organize an educational trip to take the children camping, but a parent may be afraid of the child getting hurt.
Another problem is that parents sometimes expert their children's interests to be similar to their own. If the parents love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if the child prefers art? if the parents enjoy sports, they may expect their child to participate in different teams. But what if the child prefers to read?
Finally, although parents want to pass on their values to their children, values can change. The children of today are growing up in a world different from their parents' world. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can't keep up with rapid social or technological changes. A student who has friends of different races at school may find that his parents don't understand or value the digital revolution.
Parents are important techers in our lives, but they aren't always the best teachers. Fortunately, we have our peers. Books and newspapers also teach us. All of them are valuable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...too. But what if the child prefers art? if the parents enjoy sports, they may expe...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...metimes parents, especially older ones, cant keep up with rapid social or technologi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ces at school may find that his parents dont understand or value the digital revolut...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...mportant techers in our lives, but they arent always the best teachers. Fortunately, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95880149813 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48762454786 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7907422119 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0476190476 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928333134015 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332855248302 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338072966334 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611367304384 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179384605785 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.