Parents who are the first knowledge provider for the children have more or less chance to teacher their children about knowledge which is more than basic life. Personally, I think parents are not the best teachers in teaching what are pretty different to usual life and are specific knowledge in some areas. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, parents may not have enough broad knowledge to teacher their children. In my personal opinion, the best teacher must need to know broad knowledge in many fields. I mean, the best teacher should understand the basic ideas which already known by human being in many fields, and this teacher can use these knowledges to construct the basic figure of this world. To make this opinion more clearly, we can think about the following example. In the middle of class, the student can’t understand the point which is given by the teacher, and request more explanation on it. In this situation, if the teacher has enough broad knowledges in many fields, he/she might have the ability to describe the point in another way or perspective to make it easier to absorb.
Secondly, parents may not have specific knowledge in which their children interest. When parents have enough basic knowledge in many fields, we would continue to ask that whether he/she is expert in the specific area, which is according to the child’s interest. If the parent doesn’t have that advanced knowledges, he/she can’t bring the child more ideas or insight in that area. Therefore, the child loses the chance to learn more deep knowledge in that area.
Finally, parents may not have enough teaching skills to teach their children. If the parent has the broad knowledge and specific knowledge which are describing above, next question which would be propose to his/her front is whether he/she has adequate teaching skills. The parent without adequate teaching skills would not have the ability to confer the knowledge to the child effectively and efficiently. Despite he/she has lots ideas and points and wants to transfer the information into the child’s head, without teaching skills, he/she must be fail to complete this goal.
In conclusion, I am of opinion that parents are not the best teachers to help their children know more about this world. This is because they may not have enough broad knowledge, specific knowledge, or teaching skills. Without any of these three, the parent must not be the best teacher.
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 70
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 60
- Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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- TPO 47 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...wledge to teacher their children. In my personal opinion, the best teacher must need to know bro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, first of all, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41287523236 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407673860911 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3674993515 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.55 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134611779974 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582857973094 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394954191463 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978623282287 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369692627023 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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