Since the dawn of civlization, time which we have with kids played amazing roled in each society. It is a way which we forget our problems and relax. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine its constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have been taken to elevate its role. Some people may hold the view that today's parents have interest with them than their mother and father. However, some other take an opposide side and believe that it was not true. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and think that today's people are more sensible.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that importance of education. Due to their education level, men and women are sensitive to their infant compared to the last decades. They tend to spend much more time with them while education level increased. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experience. When I was in elemantary school in Germany, I used to do my homework alone since my father and mother is not litered roomates. I have a children and I can help her and study together just because I graduated from university.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that persons do not have to work long. Our parent do not have spare time for their kids due to tha fact that heavy work hours.In today's modern world, parents have to time to do recrational activities such as playing games, going trekking, surfing on internet due to lessen work hours. Working 6 hour in a day gives many opportunities to do and therefore they use time effectivly with them-
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are the fires one which cross the mind at first glance. They are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. thanks to competition between countries, people often have struggle with make living. The noteworth refreshingly intelligible statistic, reveal by a recent social reaseach conducted by a team of scientists who work at Harvard University, show that a significant percent of participated people think that kids should have higher education to find decent job.
To wrap it up, contemplanting all foresaid reasons, one soon relaize that today's kids are bring up more intellegiently then us.I suppose that next generation will grow up than current one.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this isa good idea? Support your' opinion by using specific reasons and details 60
- Participating in organizations and clubs is as important as academic studies for students. 60
- Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
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Suggestion: Thanks
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'have' and 'struggle'.
Suggestion: have often struggle
...o competition between countries, people often have struggle with make living. The noteworth refresh...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i suppose, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85141509434 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64320089881 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5700059731 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171063041687 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447766281581 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457023838397 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889491902794 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290355485393 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.