Both reading and speaking discuss strange sounds which sailors in Russian submarines heard. The article states that Russian sailors heard strange underwater noises called quackers and provide several theories what was it. The speaker, cast serious doubts on this idea and beleive that none of these theories are convincing enought and refutes all the author's reasons.
First of all, the Article claims that the strange noises are resemble the calls of male and female ocra whales. The area which submarines were picking up the noises are konown inhabit. the speaker opposes it by saying that ocras live near the surface of water. these saound can not be belong of ocras.
Secondly, the article states that as a second theory the sound might be caused giant squid. These squid which is giand marine invertebrates, are so fast. Due to their bodies and speed, it is hard to detect by sonar. The article states that there are not record voice of giant squid.
Lastly, the article posits that russian submarine may pick up stray sounds from some military technologies such as another country's submarines. However, the speaker refutes it by saying that they are move quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'resembled'.
Suggestion: resembled
...icle claims that the strange noises are resemble the calls of male and female ocra whale...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...king up the noises are konown inhabit. the speaker opposes it by saying that ocras...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...t ocras live near the surface of water. these saound can not be belong of ocras. S...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...article states that there are not record voice of giant squid. Lastly, the art...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 194.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07731958763 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23716684814 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2033112341 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352828692785 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110888660632 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778344923021 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199066968584 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328802569928 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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