It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, making decisions is an important issue in everybody's life, and most of the time choosing the best option is very difficult, especially for young people. Some people have the opinion that in the past young people got more help from their parents to make decisions, but today they can decide for themselves, Whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. As far as I am concerned, nowadays young people become more independent in comparison to the past, and make decisions for themselves and manage their life on their own. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first significant point to be mentioned is that today's parents teach their children to follow their dreams and fight for their goals. Children grow up with this kind of mind that they should make their life, so when they become young people they make their decision by themselves because that is the way that they grow up. Parents play a key role in children's lives if they teach their children to not be afraid to make a decision, their children grow up as independent people. In that case, young people prefer to follow their dreams and make their life, they can choose their future career, and never feel regret in their lives. Take my personal experience as a compelling example; when I was a child my parent always supported me to make my decision, in that time the decisions were very simple, but I remember that they respect my choice and let me to decided for myself, although they guide me in all steps, the final decision was on me. Time passed and I become a young woman, who should make important decisions in her life, such as choice of major of study, migrating to another country to study in another country, etc. In all that decisions my parents supported me to make the right decision, but they never made that decision for me, instead teach me to think as a mature person and stand for my choices, because of them, nowadays I see myself as a successful person, who builds her life by herself, and I do the same thing for my children.
Another reason, which should be taken into consideration, is that today's young people are better able to make decisions for their lives because they grow up in a modern world, the improvement of technology and social activity change people with time, they become independent and try to make their lives by their own. In addition, today's young people have more knowledge about their world, and they believe that the world belongs to them, so they should decide for themselves, and stand for all consequences. For instance, my parents gown up in different times and different situations, they follow their parents and let them decide for them, but today I want to make my life by my choices and by my decisions, if there is a risk for me, I will accept that challenge and face with it, because I know that I have to live with my decisions, not my parents. I believe develop of technology plays an important role in young people's lives, they know how to adapt to the development of the world and be flexible, that is the reason that young people can make their living by their decisions.
In conclusion, based on what has been discussed above, nowadays; young people are more independent than young people in the past, they learn to make their living on their own, they grow up in a modern environment and technology, so young people are more aware than before, they make a better life for everyone by their decisions.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 109.0 43.0788530466 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2923.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 624.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68429487179 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50693021608 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.395833333333 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2314025424 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.6875 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.6045352989 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428054420071 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191564837732 0.076458572812 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980904346839 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32967876131 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353291031146 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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