It is clearly understood in such a sophisticated world, everyone has a social or political view for themselves, and these views could be different for anyone. Teachers are not exceptional in this issue but are very necessary for them to keep their opinions hidden from students. most of the people are agree with me, whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. In the subsequent paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students or young people do not enough experiment in real life to understand the personal view in these subjects and if the teachers told them their personal opinion it could be very effective on them. So is a very important thing for teachers to keep this issue hide, and teach the student the right way that they could find their answer in it. Sometimes teachers should tell them something that is the opposite of their views but is very necessary for them to learn the student right thing. It seems so proper to mention an example of my life related to this subject. I remember when I was a high school student, and my teacher take about political, and social views. At that time I think so much about that staff and it was confusing for me because I knew that my family have an opposite view about that subjects, so I decides to take about that with my parents, and when I told them everything they become so sad and say to me I should see everything and hear everything carefully, they told me I should decide about this issue by myself, in the future, and I should not let anybody affected in my opinion. It was so important to me to realize that my teacher's action was not right and after that, I try to read about everything and think about it. this is my life, and social or political views are a personal thing.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that teachers should be careful about their actions because sometimes it seems to brainwash student parents. By and large, the responsibility of being a teacher is very much, and they should act or speak very carefully, every decision could make the future of the country correctly or wrongly. Teachers should talk about social, and political subjects, but the point is they should not teel their personal opinion about that. If teachers do not talk about this subject at all is could be very harmful to everyone in the future. Imagine the future of some country without any knowledge about politics, so it could be a very chaotic situation for that country and is not good at all.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that the importance of teaching and teachers' job is not deniable, and is very necessary for the government to increase the number of vise teachers for having a grate country in future. In fact, there is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, so, whereas, i think, in fact, by and large, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65601503759 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5575537769 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426691729323 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.653862965 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.368421053 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202376181998 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751641046178 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448401878363 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123288712807 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290320847531 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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