Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<span style=" font-family:'Arial'; font-size:12pt;">In this century, that life has becom extreamly hard side by side making decision, as a matter of great importance subject in every society, has become difficult too. I firmly believe that, based on recent circumstance which i am seeing parents help their children to make a great decision because of their value experience and their knowledge. This essay is going to provide these two reasons.</span>
First of all, making a vital decision is of complicated that that " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">youth cannot recognize them. On the other hand, parents are of great experience in life which can help children in a correct way. they had made mistakes, and correct them. In addition, they have heard variety stories of making decisions of others, and learn their experience too, so they can give invaluable advicese to young people to have a great choice, so because of these reasons young children make decisions with their parent's support. For instance, when I wanted to take a toefl exam my mother suggested I taking some online courses to improve my speaking skill, she had taken toefl twenty years ago, so she has a great experience. I took online courses for speaking skill, now I can speak better than before.
Secondly, parents are of a wide horizon of thinking because they work out, have different connections, and cognitive economy situation correctly, so they aware about future better than young people. youth just spend their time on the net or in their schools, so they do not have a real aspect of view about life and future. Besides, parents are working in society, and know what's have benefits for their children. If they help young children, they will be succesful in their life, and will not regretfull. As an example, when I decided to invest my money last week, my father suggested I buying some dollars, I listened to his, and buy two hundred dollars, I am so happy because the price of dollars has increased ten percentage exponentially since last week.
Although, some people believe that, yought are independent, and able to make decisions lonely. In my point of view, they cannot do this alone and parents help them in good ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08533333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02651982023 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5945819833 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.133333333 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258805819779 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894829957631 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801372917987 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163782891611 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360914090085 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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