Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
In today's modern and complex world, people tend to be independent of themselves instead of others. Most of the People know this fact they should learn how they act in different conditions and they should make their own dictions lonely. Some people believe in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives but others disagree. From my point of view, nowadays parents have their own problems in their life and they can help us just in some condition and it is not suitable to ask them to make the decision for us. I express two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
First, in the past parents were control their children in every condition and they had an impact on children's every decision and they did not allow them to choose their way by themselves, those days, parents had an influence on their children important diction such as university choosing, marriage, job selection and …, so they did not have any chance to do what they want and follow their dreams. For example, in the past when somebody wants to get married they should tell to their parents and they find somebody for them or when a person select career their parents search it and if they allow them, they could go to work. But nowadays people can choose their university, career, partner by themselves then tell to their parents and most of the parents accept their choice and their respect their wishes.
Second, with the development of technology and social media people's awareness has increased, and society is changing so, it has an impact on people's lifestyle and their opinion. In today's modern life with the change of the society people, that they live in this society should update themselves with it. From young ages, children should learn how to face decisions and how they can take it by themselves without any help because parents have their own life and they are not with them everywhere so they should have the power to choose their way by depending on themselves if it is right or wrong.
To sum up, from my vantage point, in compotation with past nowadays young people tend to take their own decision by themselves. First, the parents did not allow them to make their decision lonely and most of the time they made the decision for their children. Second, with the development of society, the parents have to change their mind and update so they respect their children's decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ety is changing so, it has an impact on peoples lifestyle and their opinion. In todays ...
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Line 4, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they respect their childrens decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75806451613 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33812846061 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435483870968 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9366921089 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450523526507 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196869930821 0.076458572812 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171830177658 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333275547007 0.150856017488 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121708686129 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.