As society grows today, people’s lives have become better and richer. However, people complain more and try to get more, we are never satisfied. Why are not many people satisfied with what they have and want more? I will tell you three parts: comparison, anxiety and desire.
First is about comparison. We always live in competition. For example, when we are young, we compete with test scores; when we are in our twenties, we compete with the name of the university; when we are in our thirties, we compete with jobs. That is why we live by comparing ourselves with others. However, if you compare them, there is no end, so people are not satisfied with what they are given.
Second is the anxiety. Many people think that if we are satisfied with our situation, and do not develop, we will fall behind. Thus, many people worry about it. Eventually, because of anxiety people can not be satisfied.
Last is desire. People are animals of desire. That is why we can not live without greed. This desire works both in the good and the bad, anyway, it makes people never satisfied. Therefore we can not change this fact.
This is all about why people can not be satisfied in their situation. I also can not be satisfied even if I am rich; no matter how good I study; no matter how pretty. Therefore my conclusion is that there is no one in the world who is satisfied with his or her life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56349206349 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38292246536 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0796396637 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7619047619 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219910612828 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722938930402 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923451175623 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132674811979 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826483745694 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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