Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Teachers are the role models of society.They are the ones who motivate the students to do better in every domain and help them achieve their life goals. But they need not be always the one who teaches in educational institutions, in my opinion, the best teacher in a child s life is their parents’institutions, me,Parents are the child's first role model
Parents play an inevitable role in a child s life.The child being born into this world is completely ignorant of everything. They have no idea about the universe, the language, culture, language, culture of things, what to do and what not to do, which is right and so on.so it is through their constant advice and guidance, achild is exposed to all these and get to know about it.
Parents also play an important role in shaping the character of their children. They can learn good values from their home that will mound them into better citizens in future.so future leaders of the world come from good parenting.Being the first teacher, every child gets to know how to differentiate between right and wrong from them. Children behave, react and imitate the same as their parents. Parents play important role in encouraging and motivating their kids. Good parenting helps the child to be positive, strong and smart.
They also protect the child from any harm and provide them with food, clothing and a place to live. Theirsupervision and controlplay an important role in their education also. They financially support children to get a better education. They are the first educator in students’life. They give guidance throughout our life. They also vital role in shaping one slicegoal, they can encourage us to dream big and never giveup. Their advice can motivate them in each step andhelps children to develop socially and emotionally.
In short, a man s life is difficult in the absence of good parenting. Parents lay the foundation stone for future leaders in parenting. Parents and other fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
...Teachers are the role models of society.They are the ones who motivate the students ...
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...s life is their parents’institutions, me,Parents are the childs first role model Pare...
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...ay an inevitable role in a child s life.The child being born into this world is com...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...at will mound them into better citizens in future.so future leaders of the world come fro...
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...s of the world come from good parenting.Being the first teacher, every child gets to ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
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...ay an important role in their education also. They financially support children to g...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re the first educator in students’life. They give guidance throughout our life. They...
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...They give guidance throughout our life. They also vital role in shaping one slicegoa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99088145897 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89225019441 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537993920973 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.8773450407 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0349812468051 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139289178713 0.076458572812 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202001828079 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0220448104145 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124599744267 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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