Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should always show their strong emotions (such as excitement, anger, joy). Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
People normally try to communicate with each other in everyday life trough different ways. Sometimes a person may show its feels and emotions to make someone understand better or get a specific message indirectly. However, there is a controversy between people that any one should present its emotion openly to other individuals or not. Personally, I think that everyone should have the ability to express its feelings in society due to many reasons which I support them strongly.
First, presenting emotions and feeling may help anyone to transfer his message correctly because, someone may not have the ability to completely told his idea in words. Emotions will help you to communicate with other individuals properly. I believe it would be easier to know someone if that person present its emotions to you overtly. For example, my friend Jim always had trouble with others since they mostly misjudged him by his words and beliefs. It was so bad that he started seeing a shrink. His therapist told him that he must show his emotions and feelings about whatever he intended to talk about. Surprisingly, his problem was decreased radically and his friends found that they judged him wrongly before only because he could not use the proper words for telling the massage right.
Secondly, forcing yourself to hide your feelings and emotions may harm you seriously in long-term without you knowing that you are doing damage to your soul unintentionally. Scientists have shown that presenting emotions may assist humans to put out their inside feelings and anxieties which were suppressed during time gradually. If we prevent any person from showing its true emotions this would lead to their sense of banishment from their surrounding environment. So, they may become depressed and isolated.
Last but not least, presenting your inside to your friends and family can also help you to revise yourself any different occasions. You can show a wrong emotion in condition without understanding it. But, your friends and family can help you by telling you that your reaction was not right in an especial situation which can help you to control your emotions and express them exactly in the moment it was needed.
In conclusion, feelings are some things that are shaped inside us. Usually we do not know whether to use them or not in an incident. I think that presenting feelings and using our emotions in our communicating style can be productive in most conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
... its feels and emotions to make someone understand better or get a specific message indire...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...re is a controversy between people that any one should present its emotion openly to ot...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... were suppressed during time gradually. If we prevent any person from showing its ...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they may become depressed and isolated. Last but not least, presenting your insi...
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Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... your emotions and express them exactly in the moment it was needed. In conclusion, feeli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07125307125 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65945292197 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538083538084 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7528607088 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214052555926 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647398225285 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413222435392 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120942801738 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350670354912 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.