Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should buy the products made in their own country.
Whether people should buy the products made in their own country is a complicated issue. Some people might argue that it's not necessary for people to buy their own country's products. However, after deep deliberation, I contend that people should buy the products produced in their own country for their own good.
Firstly, transportation increases the trend of global warming, and buying the product made nearby can decrease needs of transportation. The emission of carbon dioxide is the root cause of global warming. People produce a lot of carbon dioxide due to the consumption of crude oil by cars and trunks. If we buy the products produced abroad, then we will consume a huge amount of crude oil because of far distance transportation. But if humans buy the products produced nearby, then we can decrease the emission of carbon dioxide and slow down the trend of global warming. As a result, we can prevent ourselves from attacks of rising temperature.
Secondly, people can avoid harm by supervising the producing process more easily if they buy the goods made in their own country. The less the distance between consumers and producers, the more possibilities that consumers can give pressure to producers. The more pressure the producers have, the better the products can be. Moreover, our government can regulate native factories more easily. By contract, our government has less power to control foreign factories. Therefore, products made in our own country have higher qualities and are conducive to our health.
Lastly, one country has more chances to flourish if people support their own industries. Industries earn money in that there are customers and native people are important sources of clients. For instance, many Korean support their companies very much. Thanks to their domestic consumption of these native products, many companies in Korea have the foundation to success. This way, Korea’s economy progresses.
Admittedly, some people may argue that there are some advantages of buying foreign products, such as cheaper prices and more choices. However, in my opinion, the disadvantages are much more than the advantages. With the reasons I mentioned above I believe that people should buy the products made in their own country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether people should buy the products made in ...
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Suggestion:
... Lastly, one country has more chances to flourish if people support their own ind...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... This way, Korea’s economy progresses. Admittedly, some people may argue that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27624309392 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75937399918 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0751758845 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0434782609 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7391304348 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346864690264 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110575028084 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134485982688 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214828881611 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133177730815 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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