Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Nowadays, the world is intricate, developed, and competitive, so achieving goals is harder than before, but I completely agree with this statement that we should not give up our dreams. I have several reasons why I feel like this that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, we should spend time achieving our purpose. The worthiest of our wealth is time, so anyone who wants to gain valuable things should cost to earn it, and there is nothing more important than aims, so we should keep trying to become successful though it seems hard to achieve. The consequence of spending time improving abilities is gaining success. My personal experience is one of the compelling examples of this. I studied two years hard for the university entrance exam to gain a high score, but other people told me that it was just a dream, but I showed them that it was possible, and I got a good grade.
Secondly, in our world, there are different methods and techniques that facilitate our dreams, so if one of them does not work, we can change it until achieving to desirable results. So if there is no way we should construct it. For instance, flying was a long-term wish for humans, but while the different methods failed, alternative options provided this old dream, and flying was accomplished.
Last but not least, situations will be changed, and every hard situation will return to ease; therefore, hard situations will not be constant. It is possible that the opportunities for success are not provided at the present time, but they will change, and the state of the affair will become desirable. Accordingly, we should not be disappointed and continue our trying until we achieve goals. For example, we engage in financial problems now, but they will be solved in future months; despite this problem, I do not leave my goals for emigration.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that every aim is accessible by spending time, finding novel methods, and being hopeful, So we should not be disappointed and continue our endeavor to gain our wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the following essay. First of all, we should spend time achieving our purpo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... valuable things should cost to earn it, and there is nothing more important than...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t until achieving to desirable results. So if there is no way we should construct it....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8660968661 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71347742136 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3139396333 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123289548087 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455587727558 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398082203591 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071629377418 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049789856534 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.