Today's life is challenging, and everyday news indicates that life is full of unpredicted situations, and no one has knowledge about the future occurs. Therefore, in some situations, we have to do things we do not like. I entirely agree with this statement, and there are several reasons why I feel this way that I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, sometimes unpredicted happening like war, death, or natural disasters Affect our Life, and new situations force us to make hard decisions like changing our career or our life location. Maybe it seems an undesirable occurrence, but we should know that everything in the world will change, and we should prepare ourselves by doing things we do not like. My example is a compelling example of this, our family was happy, and we had no severe problems until my father's death; after that, our life was a fallthrough. My mother and I were working far more than before, and we were passing our life harder, but now our life is become different, and everything is better.
In addition, sometimes fulfilling things that are unacceptable to us improve our insight and patience. In this way, we can learn significantly more than when everything is always accessible. I am off in the opinion that one of the best ways gain an exclusive experience is through undertaking things that we do not like. Famous persons had these experiences like that; for instance, Tesla, a famous scientist in 20 century, when he was a young student in Magyarország, he consolidated his success by doing work that maybe he did not like.
Furthermore, at first, glance, doing some things are not enjoyable, but after pass time, we will be interested in them, and our outlook will be changed; as a result, we should not take this chance from ourselves. For example, when I was accepted to university for a bachelor's degree, I did not want it, and seeing that one mistake, I accepted natural resources engineering. It was not a thing I wanted, but after time I figured out that this was the sweetest mistake I have experienced in my life, and now I appreciate that.
In a nutshell, I think there are several reasons why we should try something that seems not delightful and aforementioned. However, the last point I would like to say is that we should think about the glass as half full in every situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., we have to do things we do not like. I entirely agree with this statement, and ...
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... in the following essay. To begin with, sometimes unpredicted happening like war...
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...stance, Tesla, a famous scientist in 20 century, when he was a young student in Magyaro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77832512315 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82682659164 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 16.0 1.86738351254 857% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1073290302 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173998995926 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662060286306 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072732459089 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108139231654 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546067993744 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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