Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
Books have always been considered as perfect teachers and mentors to all people all over our big planet. An opinion exists that one should only read the very books that are based on true stories and phenomena. I partly agree to this theory due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
On the one hand, books that do not appeal any facts under them inspire an idea of wonder to people. Many humans instead of working hard to achieve their goals do nothing and wait for miracle to happen. Moreover, some of them make their offspring to share their thoughts. For example, a classmate of mine has recently read a book “Treasure island” by R. L. Stevenson as a result of which he longs for being a sailor to find a treasure. Thus, huge number of humans after reading an unrealistic book cease working hard and accoun for a marvel to happen.
On the other hand, unreal stories contain positive life lessons that teach younger generation. Many fairy tales are created as an example of a moral lesson that a parent wants to teach their dearest and nearest. In addition to that, fairy tales give an obvious sample about what is good, bad, and other lessons for children. For example, the moral of Russian fairy tale “Gingerbread man” is that one should not fully trust strangers especially if they say nice things about them. Therefore, even invented stories can become a good instructor for babies that provide them with simple life lessons.
Finally, many people use true books as a guide for their lives. Everyone has heard that history is cyclical, repeats itself and reading history books would help us to avoid irreversible consequences as well as easy-solving problems. Stories based on different historical facts may enable us not to make mistakes and faults from the past. For example, my father and brother were once able to light a fire without matches while hiking because my brother had read a book about survival skills by Bear Grylls. Hence, people who read books about real life do obtain unique experience and they can overcome any bad situation.
To sum up, one cannot fully argue that kids should only read document-based literature as it inspires an idea of possible wonder, at the same time they teach common moral lessons to kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82945736434 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43099863329 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8648416503 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.45 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190415591304 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554095960569 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05247314155 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104220569785 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621949079646 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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