Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment — doing things they like to do — rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your should do
In the contemporary era, the numerous technologies are developed rapidly not only entertainment but also communication, so most people tend to be influenced by them. According to the following reasons and my personal experience, I strongly agree that people today waste time doing on personal pleasure more than they ought to do.
First of all, an internet is the one of the important technologies developed in order to encourage people both improving high speed and quality of service, so abundant people prefer to use its for their life style such as online games on a computer. For example, after finished class, many young students like to frequently visit with an internet cafe so as to play online games instead of doing homework or reading academic books.
Secondly, according to famous philosopher, every new day is another chance to change your life; however, some people may not aware that the time is the most significant thing to them. For example, in my experience, some of teenager students do not concentrate on the examination day in the tomorrow morning. They neither read academic books nor prepare for the test. On the contrary, they still go to night club, bar or theatre in order to drink beer and enjoy with their friends. When an instructor informs a score of their students, they failed.
Last but not least, social media is more influence with most of people in the present such as Facebook, Line, Twister and Instagram as a result they may lost copious things in their lives such as missing interested with surroundings including relationship with parents, friends and neighbourhood. Following numerous advertisements cajole all people to communicate by face-to-face more than chatting on online so as to reduce depression problems.
All in all, from the above reasons, I conclude that various people in the contemporary spend time too much for nonsense such as social media, unawareness with value of time and some technologies as a result they cannot manage time for worth. As describe earlier, every second counts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the contemporary era, the numerous te...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... pleasure more than they ought to do. First of all, an internet is the one of ...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rvice, so abundant people prefer to use its for their life style such as online gam...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... frequently visit with an internet cafe so as to play online games instead of doing home...
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Line 13, column 58, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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...ce-to-face more than chatting on online so as to reduce depression problems. All i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83907980685 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8443910046 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.538461538 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27409673013 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889236039703 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102565508393 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1511469747 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811328594146 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.