Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I believe life is totally depends on just one important decision. For some people, who thought practically and in straightforward manner, it is easy to take any kind of decision. But sometimes, their decisions also proved wrong. And at that time they do not have any come back path. So In my view, you always take important decision by consulting with someone. I am going to discuss some points below about this point.

The first point, involving someone in your decision making process makes you feel more confident and more positive. In other words, sometimes you have lots of solutions to one problem and also you become confused about more than two alternative solutions, in that case if you consult your point of view with someone than it will lead you to choose right decision in very confident way. For example, after getting good score in 12 th exam, i had lots of career options available. And those options were so identical that i was not able to take any decision. Even if i know that computer engineering is the best option for me, I confused among so many computer courses. At that time, one of my best teacher helped me in this decision making process.So in this way, he boosted my confidence and made me to take right decision.

The second, I believe when you take any big decision , you should always discuss it first with any person who is more experienced and trustable. In my case, i always talk with my mother before taking any decision. This is because she is more experienced and trustable. I feel more comfortable with her. On the time of my marriage decision, I met 5 to 6 boys. And i was so confused, because I never experienced it before. I mean how can i know about who is more suitable and good for me? I only met them once. But my mother shared her experiences about her life. And so i could make right decision.

The third, sometime, by consulting your problem with someone will save you from danger situations. For instance, last year I applied for job in many company as a software engineer. And as my academic score is high, i got interview calls from many software top companies. So I was so happy, and i took decision at the moment without consulting with friends or family.And also i got that job. As i heard the name of that company in many advertisement, I thought it was great company. After some days, when i told my friend about my job, he was shocked. He told me about that company's scandals. But at that time i had no any other choices. As i refused all other choices. So i realised that, if i took advice from any person in that firm, than i was safe and i did not lose another opportunities.

To sum up, If you want to take right and safe decision, than you should discuss your problem with other people. No matter whatever problem it is, you should not make any decision in hurry and on by own.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i mean', 'kind of', 'in my view', 'in other words', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198630136986 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.147260273973 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097602739726 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616438356164 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10102739726 0.0685040099705 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135273972603 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0154109589041 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54886918003 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154109589041 0.0309702414327 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00171232876712 0.00188951952338 91% => OK
Determiners: 0.0616438356164 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119863013699 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119863013699 0.0139019557991 86% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2850.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 521.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47024952015 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276391554702 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213051823417 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142034548944 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0921305182342 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54886918003 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462571976967 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.8283785437 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6684587814 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3235294118 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0231719131 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 120.699889404 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3235294118 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.441176470588 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.54480286738 505% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 36.6287117534 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.1270718232 1.45489161554 77% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215683019104 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0782698343206 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0892350644492 0.0752933317313 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.374842578719 0.497263757937 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143089714276 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633787838548 0.114077575197 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587178446064 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282396566386 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0837185505868 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156999700146 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461285771699 0.0618886996521 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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