No one can deny that there are positive and negative aspects of using plastic bags. If I were forced, I would definitely select prevent using plastic bags in each place on the earth. It is my firm belief these bags are harmful for the environment, humans and animals, for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, plastic needs more time than any type of waste to decomposition and it's needs alot of years to go a way. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was studying at the engineering collage, I passed a course which called waste management, during this course the professor gave us alot of examples about waste and their types. One of the most harmful waste cluster was plastic, because it needs a lot of time to go away and it causes many crucial problems for people's health because it makes a high influence in breathing and causes more damage for the ECO-system.
Secondly, plastic bag can damage the marine environment because there are many fish inside the ocean. Drawing from my own experience. ten yeas ago, when I was child, I went with my family to Aqaba city which is located in the Atlantic ocean. during this journey we rent a boat to make a trip inside the sea, so because I was a kid, I threw some plastic bags to the water. As a result, some fish entered inside these bags, then my father taught me a lesson about how it is wrong to use plastic bags and threw it inside the ocean because it can kill fish and make pollution inside this pretty city. If I had known what is the consequences of plastic bags, I would not have used it ever.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that plastic bags are caused many crucial problems, so it should be prevented. This is because it can affect environment and air around us, and it has the ability to destroy the marine environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50142450142 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47458489965 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9130943676 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149459101092 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546599879346 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354671889684 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100087458946 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273112659505 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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