Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, technology has improved our life for better but sometimes it has negative effects on human society. it seems technology has more influence on children rather than older. one of the newest technology is playing computer games. some people think that playing computer games is a waste of time and children should not be allowed to play them while other argue that they are good hobbies for children. Bothe sides of arguments have considerable reasons for their claims. Personally, I agree with the first one for some reasons.
first, modern devices such as mobile phones, IPods and computers has awful influence on children and they are not neither physically nor mentally active. therefore, they promote mindless and some illnesses like obesity. For example, my 8 years old brother gets up early in the mornings. After he eats breakfast, he starts playing computer games until noon, he plays online games like Counter Strike, Warcraft and Clash of Clans. During the playing games, he just seats on chair and he has no physical activity. Again, In the evening he goes to game bar to play with his friends. I think not only he wastes his time but also he endangers to get some illnesses I have mentioned. So it is clear that playing computer games is a wasting time and parents should not allow their children to play them.
Second, families can choose other hobbies in order to entertain their children. some entertainment such as playing soccer, going to a park or playing musical instruments are active amusements. These hobbies not only please their children but also they have positive effects on children. as an example, playing a guitar can increase the creativity of children or doing physical activities are good for their health. therefore, it is preferable to choose another activity instead of playing computer games.
Although, playing computer games have many negative features but sometimes they have some benefits. For instance, sometimes parents are too busy with their jobs and they don’t have enough time to spend with their children. In this case, they can choose an amusing game which is appropriate for their ages to entertain their children. but in general I believe playing computer games is wasting time.
All in all, for the reasons I have mentioned I agree with following sentence that playing computer games is a waste of time and children should not be allowed to play them. I suggest parents to put a limiting time on play computer games in order to protect their children health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02612826603 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50741589423 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475059382423 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7938219206 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.64 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.84 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371496204313 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126531114479 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12876135676 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262455566409 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109202079288 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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