Advancement in technology provides many types of games such as puzzling, racing,funny etc. Nowadays people spending most of time playing online games. I think these games do not assist us to acquire something from them. In contrast. it have negative impact on one's life. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, some people add this activity as a necessary one in their schedule. whenever they get free started play and challenges their friends and forget about time limit. This, in turn leads to addiction. No doubt they had fun while playing but this have negative impact. Many online games are violent and gamers who play them become agresive . My own experience is the evidence of this. One of my friend play a game PUBG (a online game
) all the time even avoid lunch sometimes. When he fails to complete the level, start fighting with nearby people due to frustration. I remember one day he could clear the task them he broke his new smartphone because of anger. From that incident I feel it affact gamer mood.
Secondly, nowadays in every house it is a serious issue that kids using a lot of smart phone to play games. Every parents have concern how to get rid of this problem because due to this children waste a lot of time along with money. They demanded to buy many online games. Children compete their peers by challenging them online. Consequently bits affact their mental as well as physical heath. According to a research kids in present uses 45% more spectacles than the past.
In conclusion, I completely disagrees that games can help to teach life important skills. It have only negative imapact
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76896551724 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44428233337 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8865931068 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1304347826 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6086956522 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159330545925 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387033491989 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427085425494 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090295592859 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468688251031 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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