To preserve environment has become challenging task worldwide. Even advance technology can't help to preserve such long lasting valuable fauna and flora species. There are many considerable step to protect environment. I thing the Government can contribute effectively. I thing this way for two reasons which, I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, In this democracy period everyone had support the Government because it is chosen by people after all. Many young and educated leaders are in politician. They are highly educated and many pupil are following them on many social media accounts. A leader can create a effective trend to plant more trees and try to preserve old trees as much as possible. I remember, two years ago a politician share his video clip of growing plant in his area and celebrated environment day. He share this video on his Instagram personal page and it went viral within a few hours. Many follower follow his trend.In a same way they also implanted tree and put its photo on social media app.
Secondly, the government also implanted many strict rule to protect tree. they spread news among people and also gave represents many workshop by university or college students. The state government in Haryana started special environmental study by adding it as mandentry course for all streams students. I remember, when i started my post graduation, i also studied environmental science for six month. I had learned many things regarding it. There are many Botenical garden under university campus and research centers. Many scientist are working there to preserver endanger tree and also some species like butterfly, birds which help plants to grow fast. My own experience is the evidence of this. When I was in school, we went for an educational trip in a agriculture institute nearby me. There I saw a lot of trees, species. A researcher who is working there explained us how greenhouse help to heat up little plants as required.
In conclusion, the government can help to conserve environment considerably by using social media and educating people through various seminar, workshop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, second, secondly, so, after all, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12034383954 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80983801929 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604584527221 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3146830576 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4583333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5416666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721680039769 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226822848715 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029895276038 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571815819614 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258646954024 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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