No one can deny that internet nowadays become essential part for humankind. My firm belief is that internet almost have solution of every problem. I feel this way for two reasons which, I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it is without a shadow of a doubt internet is worthwhile in educational programs. There are plenty of source of courses to learn. For instance I accommodate all of my competitive exams material from online courses. Internet is also useful to study kids in a innovative way, visual representation of lessons, kids can learn lot of things from internet by playing puzzling games, online paintings,dancing, cooking etc.
Secondly, internet provide a biggest platform to entertainment. There are many application on laptop and on android by using them we can listen our favorite music with lyrics, news, sports, entertaining serial, interviews etc. I explore my cooking via learning on internet. Last week I have learn how to bake cake. It is ultimate source of communication. I lived in Newyork I can make online video calling whenever want because of good internet service.
In contrast, I do not deny, it appears that internet replaced many good habit as well my own experience is the evidence of this. When i had not access internet i liked reading and spending time with my family members as well as yoga and some physical exercise which makes me feel active and fit. These days, in contrast, i used a lot of internet which makes me so lazy.
In conclusion, there is advantage and disadvantage of everything created on earth it depends upon human being to utilize it or exploit it. Internet help us in many ways like in cooking, academic material, entertaining, communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of sources'.
Suggestion: plenty of sources
...hile in educational programs. There are plenty of source of courses to learn. For instance I acc...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a innovative way" with adverb for "innovative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... Internet is also useful to study kids in a innovative way, visual representation of lessons, kids...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nternet is also useful to study kids in a innovative way, visual representation o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dancing
...playing puzzling games, online paintings,dancing, cooking etc. Secondly, internet pro...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...king etc. Secondly, internet provide a biggest platform to entertainment. Ther...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... learning on internet. Last week I have learn how to bake cake. It is ultimate source...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rce of communication. I lived in Newyork I can make online video calling whenever...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xperience is the evidence of this. When i had not access internet i liked reading...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'accessed'.
Suggestion: accessed
...is the evidence of this. When i had not access internet i liked reading and spending t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of this. When i had not access internet i liked reading and spending time with my...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ctive and fit. These days, in contrast, i used a lot of internet which makes me s...
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Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun internet seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of (internet)'.
Suggestion: a lot of (internet)
...nd fit. These days, in contrast, i used a lot of internet which makes me so lazy. In conclusio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98961937716 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94338203483 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6788304968 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.032690364726 0.236089414692 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114064416649 0.076458572812 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179242487008 0.0737576698707 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192612732557 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138975093966 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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