Everyone have their own choice while choosing a place to live. Some give preference to size to the home some consider facilities inside it. As far as i'm concerned i would chose the location as well as style while select a place to live. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most significant factor which enhance the value of a property : Location. People nowadays consider the location while deciding to buy a real estate. This is the fact that the outer view obviously play critical role. Personally, i am nature loving person i love greenery as well as a place from where i can see the natural water falling lake or large body of water such as sea or river. When i would stand of the tarrance of my house so that i can enjoy the natural view. this will heal my mind and i feel more joy using fresh air in the early morning by walking. For example currently i am living in the Delhi the most polluted and populated place in the India. Sometime i felt suffocation and have respiratory problem. That is why i would chose the place where is less crowd and less pollution. so that i can enjoy the natural air and chirping of birds in the trees.
Secondly, the other important factor while consider location is - Transportation. For many people personal vehicle cost more so they choose public transportation or may be they are environmental conservative and want to contribute to reduce pollution by avoiding personal car. But the problem is that, this would possible if yore home is near subway or bus stand so that you can easily get the vehicle to travel. If you have a good transportation facility nearby you , it would makes your life comfort. For instance, my current home location is nearby railway station we have great benifit of having this track nearby us.
Finally, a house feature definately affact our mood. House is the only place where we do rest after return from office. there should be some comfort furniture and light and some entertaining instrument that can refresh our mind and body.
In onclusion, while buying a house , in my view the location and feature of home play important role. it makes our lives easier and comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6556122449 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5412862195 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538265306122 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9773488211 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0416666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16825068671 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473798142002 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432620973129 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943492081085 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293009573779 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.