it is obvious that playing sports plays a crucial role in humans' life. people who play sport can take a lot od advantage of it in their lives. it will help them to live a healthy life and to be more healthier phissically and mentally. aslo, playing sports can benefit people in othe aspects of their life. in other words, i stongly believe that individuals can learn a lot of valuable things by playing sports. in the following paragraphs, i will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
to begin with, i think doing activities such as playing sports can teach people important lessons about life. they will learn how to try to overcome their difficult situationsin their lives in order to achieve their goals. in othe words, playing sports will help them to be not only bodily healthier but also mentally healthier. it will enable them to be more resistant to difficulties, hence, they will not give up and resist against problem that they may face. for example, i was a sensitive person before and i could not endure difficulties in my life; but, when i have become involved in playing sport, it would help to be stonger than the past and to have highe spirit to solve my problems.
secondly, i believe that another important lesson that playing sports can teach people is that they learn how to commnunicate with each other and to develop their social relationships. as a matter of fact, when people do such beneficial activities, they learn how to deal with personal problems and also they learn how to manage their behavior in relation to others. therefore, it will help them to be more successful in presonal and social life. for insytance, i have a friend, he could not control his action and behavior when he talk to others. when he became angry, he were not able to control it and unfortunately he lost many of his friends. i recommneded that he can choose to paly sports in order to overcome this problem. thus, he decided to do this activity and it would help him to imprive his social behavior, and now he has made a lot of friends.
to sum up, according to the points and examples mentioned above, doing activities such as playing sports will train people to have healthier life. it will improve thier lifestyle and thus they can fulfill their objectives in their lives easier and better. they can learn to be stong agains the problems and obstacles in their life and also it will help them to improve their social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69053117783 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49356975363 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45727482679 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9524916942 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202595569218 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792654039647 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902098159939 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14329627492 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406051478016 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.