Many people think that playing sports can ruin the academic performance. So children should focus on the study first. But from my point of view, I agree with the statement, children life improve by playing sports for many reasons like in terms of health, personality development and help in developing a mind .
First, Health is first priorities in children's lives. Sports help to fit and healthy. So that they can have a good development physically. For instance. I have a nephew, He is four years old. He likes to play with the friend cricket and football. So, he is growing really fast and his health is also good. But one of his friend’s parents do not like that his friend to play. Because they think it will harmful this friend play too much to his friend grow condition is very slow as compared to him.
Second, playing sports can help in making new friends and to socialise. A person who plays sport,they have the ability to influence people. For example, I used to had very shy person in the past. When I joined the basketball training . Through sports, I started to make many new friends so we could talk with them and gain a different kind of knowledge about the person and social habits. So, it had make me to develop a good personality which is most needed thing in personal and professional lives. In addition to this, now I have a big network of people which is good for the happier and friendliness life.
Last but not least, when you play a sport, then it makes you very sharp minded and your thinking ability will also improved. If you come up on children then it is very mandatory for them because they in growing stage. They need to deal with many things in future, so sports will help develop the mind, and it teaches to face the problem very easy whether problems are easy or hard. It makes you feel very light weighted by mind in other words you can yourself burden free. For example, I play everyday Basketball and I maintain my profession and personal life very well. When left practicing sport for time before I used to find myself very depressed, and I used to get irritated by small things. So this incident taught me to practice every day or four times in a week.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that playing sports are very important to live a good life to a child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... lives. Sports help to fit and healthy. So that they can have a good development physic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55344418052 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42899259569 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515439429929 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7486031667 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7307692308 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1923076923 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207172254699 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543234269673 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528137212366 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126441145647 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386543397045 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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