Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
When it come issue on home, we think that an ideal house which is lash of all the facilities. Some people think that advantage of modern houses are more than that of the traditional houses. However, others have the opposite view. I also believe that living in a modern house is comfortable, secure and more economic as compared to the traditional houses.
First, comfort level in modern life is very high. You do not have to worry about the laundry, wash the dishes and making food all by yourself. In fact this kind houses are pre-planned and installed already. In addition to this, modern houses are controlled by electronics appliances such as stoves, television, light etc all by your smartphone. Refrigerator, air-conditioning etc. is automatically adjust in the standard norm. In these type of house, you can enjoy as like king or queen without any human assistance.
Secondly, security is other mandatory benefits of modern house. Nowaday technology get advance. Technical security gadgets are effective than the faithful watchman. For instance, CCTV cameras and smart alarm is play huge role in housing security system. CCTV recorded all the activity of the house whether it is inside or outside. Smart alarm system does not allow someone to enter the house, uness who knows the password. In addition to this, modern houses are also safe for the health and any kind of unfortunate things like fire. Because it is made to take all risk in consideration like suffocation, insects, smoke etc.
Last but not least, living in a modern house make people more productive. Because people save a lot of time, hard work, and money from doing daily housework like laundry, cooking, cleaning etc. Therefore, they can invest their time in something which is useful or we could make a lot of money from that. On the other hand in tradition houses, we always used to worry about the upcoming problems, because when problem came, all the work got pending. Therefore we had to lose more valuable time and money. For example, Traditional houses’s walls are not isolated from the heat, rain and cold. So, we had to experience all seasons disadvantage in that houses.
Form the above reason and example, I strongly believe that modern houses are more safe, comfortable and economical.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66779276448 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569553805774 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0611630743 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7777777778 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48148148148 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185209466756 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472740010254 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499563933961 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111047333552 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304222954157 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.