Hearing about a successful athlete, one often pays more attention to how they strove for them and is less interested in what god has granted to their bodies. Shows featuring medal winners tell such stories as how their parents grabbed them from their cozy bed to go exercising at dawn in their childhood. During interviews, they bring up the time and effort they put in daily training to keep prepared for games at all times. Anyway, most would believe practice and hard work play key parts, instead of natural ability and talent.
No one becomes an athlete without practice, let alone being successful. Kids don’t know whether to choose sports as a career in their early childhood. However, through actual sports activities, for either recreation or matches on campus, their interest in sports grows and they begin pursuing their dream sport. After that, they gain confidence from further practicing and playing in more professional games, thus deciding to pick sports as their job.
Without hard work, the success of an athlete won’t last long. Regular practice helps athletes keep their muscle memories. Otherwise injuries become inevitable, which would declare their career a sudden death. Also, rivals’ techniques are constantly evolving, so continuous practice is indispensable unless one is ok with falling behind soon. In addition, there may be occasional adjustments to game rules, efforts are required to get accustomed to them.
Sole natural ability or talent won’t suffice, since there are various other difficulties which they cannot cope with. Sports is no stable career. It does not bring an ideal job security. Athletes used to have high casualties in Ancient Greece. Nowadays, they face lots of risks as well. Injuries are inevitable. Gangs may kidnap them for ransom or competition manipulation. And accidents are likely to occur on frequent sports travels. As their age accumulates, the possibility of kissing sports goodbye for poor performance increases because of the gradual decline in their strength. Hard work helps them focus on games and eases their worries on instabilities. As a result, they become strong-minded and immune to terrible failures or unwanted yet drastic changes in their life.
A pilot on duty for a commercial airline has to take at least one flight in any 30 days, or a cumbersome bootstrap re-training is required to pick up. Athletes may get various benefits from their natural ability and talent, but to push such gifts to their limits and keep them in a good shape for games needs countless effort and a rather strong heart. Throughout the fast-paced success story of an athlete, practice and hard work are never absent.
- People today are much better informed about international news than they were in the past 90
- People today are much better informed about international news than they were in the past 90
- People today are much better informed about international news than they were in the past 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Practice and hard work are more important to an athlete s success than natural ability and talent Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Today s media TV and online news sites for example offer a lot of information on many topics but people do not use this information to really learn something thoroughly and in depth Use specific reason 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ps athletes keep their muscle memories. Otherwise injuries become inevitable, which would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, at least, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1908045977 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63630155267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611494252874 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4695062049 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6296296296 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48148148148 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145564884835 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458279952902 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607265425825 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956631436504 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315842762507 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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