Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
technology is changing day by day. therefore, it requires us to update with this. internet access is a matter of important to us to adjust to this changing technology. In my point of view, nearly all people were profoundly affected by it, and I agree with this statement which the powerful government should give people to use it free to help holding online courses, and help sellers to make more money.
First, recently approximately all schools and universities have been
closed
since the disease which called Covide-19 was spread all around the world. therefore, holding online classes on the internet have become current. Based on the high cost of the internet, is a better idea to give offer to citizens at no cost for using the net. In this case, they can learn new things online. In addition, students encourage to continue their education. For instance, my mother is a teacher who has a huge number of students in our city. she needs the free internet access to hold her classes. If the government gives this offer, she can do it, otherwise, she should stop her work.
Second, recently because of corona virus most shopping malls have been
closed
in some countries. As a result, some people try to sell their items online. Besides, others who want to keep social distance and help to stop spreading this virus, prefer going online shopping, so all people need the internet access free to buy and make money. One of my friends who had a cloths store has been forced to
close
his store because of rules after spreading covid-19. Now he has a public page on Instagram to sell his items. providing free internet access can help him to sell more items.
Although some people believe that providing building roads are more important than internet access, I firmly believe, is as important as other services, and I deem it can help holding online courses, and help sellers to sell more items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
technology is changing day by day. therefore, it r...
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Suggestion: Therefore
technology is changing day by day. therefore, it requires us to update with this. in...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...re, it requires us to update with this. internet access is a matter of important to us t...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
...government should give people to use it free to help holding online courses, and hel...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to hold' or 'hold'.
Suggestion: to hold; hold
...ould give people to use it free to help holding online courses, and help sellers to mak...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and help sellers to make more money. First, recently approximately all school...
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Suggestion:
...y all schools and universities have been closed since the disease which called C...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ide-19 was spread all around the world. therefore, holding online classes on the internet...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: continuing
...online. In addition, students encourage to continue their education. For instance, my mothe...
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Suggestion: She
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...rona virus most shopping malls have been closed in some countries. As a result, ...
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Suggestion: Providing
...ic page on Instagram to sell his items. providing free internet access can help him to se...
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Suggestion:
...ess can help him to sell more items. Although some people believe that provid...
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Line 17, column 177, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to hold' or 'hold'.
Suggestion: to hold; hold
... other services, and I deem it can help holding online courses, and help sellers to sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84498480243 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42959262741 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.6383839662 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263474167409 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726577283568 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707421156928 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106525095643 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695315836645 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.