Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
In modern era, advances in technology are altering all aspects of humans' lives. Nowadays, governments should provide their citizens with easy access to Internet. In this regard, the inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among people is that whether gaining access to free Internet is as essential as other services, or investing in other facilities can culminate in some benefits. From my vantage point, Notwithstanding all the deleterious aspects of Internet on individuals lives, it makes an excellent contribution to rendering their lives more convenient. Therefore, allocating an enough budget on free Internet access is advantageous. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicupus reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The most significant point to be mentioned is that offering Internet access provides individuals with the opportunity to live conveniently. In other words, If people can have an easy access to Internet, they will afford their living necessaties more readily. For the purpose of illustration, rarely do people need to buys their groceries from a physical store, instead them buy them on the internet. Similarly, individuals can shop from the comfort of their home, without having to phyisically go to a store which can save their time and effort. As a consequence, an easy access to Internet can revolutionize people's lives and helping them spend their time and energy to tackle more important issues.
Another paramount reason which should be referred to is that an easy Interet access can lead to more job prospects for societies. Accordingly, providing Internet access endows individuals with the chance to set up online businesses. Take a personal experience as an example in order to shed light in this issue, I used to have a friend who due to lack of funding, could not set up her own desirable business. When the government of the country she lived in paved the way for making Internet extensive, she started an online shop which was not required considerable money. Had not she provided with the opportunity, she would not worked on her favorable job.
To recapitulate, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that the benefits of providing Internet through a contry at no cost outweigh its drawbacks and it is more important than other services,for it not only helps people live more conveniently without any serious difficulties, but also offers more job chances for individuals. As far as I am concerned, I recommend that governmnets dedicate enough funds through the development of Internet access.
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| 2023-04-22 | Mitra-T | 76 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...tly. In other words, If people can have an easy access to Internet, they will afford their liv...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'buy'.
Suggestion: buy
... illustration, rarely do people need to buys their groceries from a physical store, ...
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Line 2, column 564, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...heir time and effort. As a consequence, an easy access to Internet can revolutionize peoples l...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a due'.
Suggestion: who is a due
... in this issue, I used to have a friend who due to lack of funding, could not set up he...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ded with the opportunity, she would not worked on her favorable job. To recapitulate...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...it is more important than other services,for it not only helps people live more conv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26811594203 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03974255049 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567632850242 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5582021593 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334902561264 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116129650634 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922130720217 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210363107901 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057304833791 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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