Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Connection to each other is an important factor of human life. Humans are social animals, Hence, no matter where we are we tend to try connect with each other. As a result, there have been discussions about wether it is better to offer network access and internet connection to citizens at no cost. In my view, There is a need for all citizens to have access to internet free of charge.
First, some people cannot access in person education. Some people may have medical issues preventing them from leaving their houses or may live in environments that have a hard time accessing an education center to help these people have better education it is essential to have free internet. For example, during Covid-19 pandemic there were many people that couldn't leave their houses, furthermore, there are many children in remote villages with no access to educational facilities, and poverty prevents them from leaving their homes and living in a place with better facilities, many such children have to give up higher education due to their situation. Free internet access can allow these people to access online courses fixing the problem. as you can clearly see free internet access can have a big impact on the citizens education.
Second, mental health is an important issue for everybody. When away from home and under financial pressure, connecting with our family and friends sustaining no costs, allows us to feel less lonely and depressed. For example, when Mahse, a friend of mine migrated to another country she was very lonely and was under a lot of stress due to financil issues. Mahsa explained that she would cry every night for six months and was going through a phase of depression. This went on until she had access to internet allowing her to connect with her family she said that this connection allowed her to feel a lot better and she felt happier. I believe there are many others with such an experience. So, by providing internet free of charge these people can connect with their loved ones allowing them to lead better lives.
In conclusion, I believe it is essential to provide free internet access to all citizens. Because free internet access can gauranty better education and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Suggestion: As
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Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cess online courses fixing the problem. as you can clearly see free internet acces...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...net access can have a big impact on the citizens education. Second, mental health is an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90159574468 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46360877771 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518617021277 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6915674418 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259733874793 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986788245557 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649117902472 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181131313433 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466926334551 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.