Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this progressive world, there is a surge of city-growth all around the world. This trend has diverse effects on societies like a double-edge sword. In my opinion, generally this unexpected growth's rate of cities has more negative impact on our societies rather than positive ones. In the following essay, I will elaborate on my view.
To begin with, uncontrolled cities' growth affect the environment negatively. To provide enough land for building houses and other infrastractures, most of the cities intrude to the natural fields; such as wild life inhabitat, natural landscapes and other necessary environmental resources and destroy them. For example, In my country, egypt, in all big cities included capital of country and states capitals, people has made their building on the outskirt of the city without considering that they must respect environment's rights. Because of this human invasion, nowadays, we suffer from lossing vegetation, soil errusion, and climate change in those cities. These dire consequences have made life condition very hard for all residents in those cities, regardless they take care of nature right or no. Had people taken the right decision about the citys' growth plan, we would had seen acceptable living condition in our cities.
In addition, in metropolitans people suffer from many diseases, which they root from overpoopulation as well as endless growth of cities with their disastrous condition. Cities' facilites such as streets, parks, governmental offices cannot grow with the population's expansion. As a result, there is always a big gap between demand and supply in this need. For example, in most big cities in the world, the shortage of communication ways, bad quality of air, crowdness and heavy traffic pose many drawbacks in daily life, which end up having many physical and mental illness in people. In our country's capital, Cairo, we see an increasing number of patients with lung diseases. Histric and mental illness is growing up too. Ministry of health announced, if the govenment do not plan to control the growth of cities, we will encounter surge of lethal health problems in near future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that rapid and huge growth of cities pose negative impacts on cities more than positive ones. This is because infrastructures cannot meet people essential needs and because uncontrolled growth casue people suffer from diverse illnesses.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
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...n about the citys growth plan, we would had seen acceptable living condition in our...
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...table living condition in our cities. In addition, in metropolitans people suf...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...vernmental offices cannot grow with the populations expansion. As a result, there is always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31510416667 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80798127546 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1787325043 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.421052632 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17367458607 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551205455901 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505242725759 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11563319921 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278660310992 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this progressive world, there is a su...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g essay, I will elaborate on my view. To begin with, uncontrolled cities growt...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
.... To begin with, uncontrolled cities growth affect the environment negativel...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 886, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...n about the citys growth plan, we would had seen acceptable living condition in our...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...table living condition in our cities. In addition, in metropolitans people suf...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...vernmental offices cannot grow with the populations expansion. As a result, there is always...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ethal health problems in near future. In conclusion, I strongly believe that r...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31510416667 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80798127546 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1787325043 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.421052632 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17367458607 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551205455901 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505242725759 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11563319921 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278660310992 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.