Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Rather than help children with their homework, parents should encourage their children to do their work independently.
Nowadays, whether the students should finish the work by them independently or with the help of their parents has become a significant problem in education. Some people think that only by doing work independently can the potential creativity be fully cultivated, while others believe that the parents can help students finish the work more efficiently. In my opinion, there are significant benefits to be gained from accomplishing the task with their parents in collaborative efforts.
Firstly, help students do the homework will strength the relationship between parents and children. This gives children a great opportunity to communicate with their parents, also parents can be familiar with kids. For example, my uncle Steve used to be busy with his work and almost had no time to get information about his son, for example what subject he studied and what kinds of friend he had. What’s worse, my cousin got addicted into online games. When my uncle realized the problem and began to do the homework with his son in collaborative efforts. In the process, he gradually knows the preference and interest of the child and my cousin accept the prohibition of online games. We can conclude that parents will get good relationship with their children if they help them to do the homework.
Secondly, helping children with homework can help them have better thinking skills. If they do the work jointly, adolescents can get lots of suggestions of thinking in different ways. For instance, when I once had a problem of writing the strategy of air pollution. The related materials were so hard to be collected, so that I don’t know how to write it. My father told me about the “Great Smog” in the London, which killed 4000 people in 4 days. I finally wrote an excellent article which was praised by my teacher. It is obvious that parents can promote their children’s thinking skills by helping them do the homework.
However, there are some benefits to finish the work independently, which may help them learn to plan things independently. Sometimes, without the parents’ help, they may feel frustrating when facing troublesome questions with no idea, then waste too much time on some unnecessary points.
To sum up, helping children do homework can strength the relationship between parents and children, and have better thinking skills. Therefore, parents should help children do homework.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Rather than help children with their homework parents should encourage their children to do their work independently 77
- Do you agree or disagree Rather than help children With their schoolwork parents should encourage their children do their work independently 73
- Do you agree or disagree Rather than help children With their schoolwork parents should encourage their children do their work independently 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13775510204 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8271015411 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4113616075 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9047619048 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394457927338 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139156918005 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126405410685 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241004768223 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087508215623 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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