Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The life's rules have a tremendous impact on people. They could Enhance people life in many relams. From my vantage point, I believe that the young individuals should follow ristrict rules for the following reasons.
To begin with, following the rules could help youngester to be success and acheive their goals. For instance, today, many of libraries prevent the student from using phone in order to prevent distraction and confuse the studying people during stydying. As a result, many of youngsters could have a quite location to study and success. Moreover, when I rolled in college. The dean impose special uniform for all student in order to prevent the discremenation between the young individuals. Consequently, this rule helpled me to save alot of time Because I did not need to weak up early to prepare my clothes, Or went to shop to look for new clothes. I was very hapy to follow this rule to save time to study because I was studing and working at that time. This rule help me to save time To finish my commitment.
In addition, rules could protect us from dangerous stiuations. For example, in industrial counties Impose Rules that prevent pedestrian, people who walk on the street, and driving humans from using the phone because when people using the phone, they will not focus on their around. Thus, following this rules could reduce accident proportion. As a result, Many of individual will protect from cars' accidents. Moreover, in these progress countries, Impose people to use a fillter on their cars to reduce carbon dioxid, which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this deltrious gas has a negative impact on people life because it could increase lung diseases. as a result, Following rules could save our health
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- tpo 05
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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- Tpo 27 Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage 70
- When you learn a new language you like to study at school in your country with your classmate Or study abroad and interaction with native speaker 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('location') instead of another adjective.
...a result, many of youngsters could have a quite location to study and success. Moreover, when I ...
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Line 4, column 382, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'imposes'.
Suggestion: imposes
...ver, when I rolled in college. The dean impose special uniform for all student in orde...
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Line 8, column 299, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... focus on their around. Thus, following this rules could reduce accident proportion....
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Line 8, column 535, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gas'?
Suggestion: gas
...o reduce carbon dioxid, which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this de...
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Line 8, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this deltrious gas has a ne...
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Line 8, column 573, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...l gases are produced from gasolin car. this deltrious gas has a negative impact on ...
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Line 8, column 670, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ecause it could increase lung diseases. as a result, Following rules could save ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55441217221 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0883557136 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3888888889 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170854405774 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592912681989 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495766070308 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134333217174 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207493034835 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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