Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The life's rules have a tremendous impact on people. They could enhance people life in many realms. From my vantage point, I believe that the young individuals should follow ristrict rules for the following reasons.
To begin with, following the rules could help youngsters to be success and achieve their goals. For instance, today, many of libraries prevent the student from using phone in order to prevent distraction and confuse studying people during stuydying. As a result, many of youngsters could have a quite location to study and success. Moreover, when I rolled in college. The dean impose special uniform for all student in order to prevent the discreamenation between the young individuals. Consequently, this rule helpled me to save alot of time Because I did not need to weak up early to prepare my clothes or go to shops to look for new clothes. I was very happy to follow this rule to save time to study because I was studying and working at that time. This rule help me to save time To finish my commitment.
In addition, rules could protect folk from dangerous stiuations. For example, in industrial counties, they impose rules that prevent pedestrian, people who walk on the street, and driving humans from using the phone because when people using the phone, they will not focus on their around. Thus, following these rules could reduce vehcales' accident proportion. As a result, Many of individual will protect from cars' accidents. Moreover, in these progress countries, they require from cars' owners to use a fillter on their cars to reduce carbon dioxid, which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this deleterious gas has a negative impact on people life because it could increase lung diseases. as a result, following rules could save our health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('location') instead of another adjective.
...a result, many of youngsters could have a quite location to study and success. Moreover, when I ...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'imposes'.
Suggestion: imposes
...ver, when I rolled in college. The dean impose special uniform for all student in orde...
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Line 8, column 569, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gas'?
Suggestion: gas
...o reduce carbon dioxid, which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this de...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which a harmful gases are produced from gasolin car. this deleterious gas has a ...
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Line 8, column 607, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...l gases are produced from gasolin car. this deleterious gas has a negative impact o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ecause it could increase lung diseases. as a result, following rules could save ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00334448161 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57998955926 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5051030303 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162475069695 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570022296666 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049603821586 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128202868215 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233586451095 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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