Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that aline with the development of cultures and societies humans determined more and more rules to control and regulate all aspects of life. But sometimes these rules make life really rigid to people especially young people who want to become an adult member of society. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that these rules always make life easier to people and all of them are necessary. However, I, to a great extent agree with this idea that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
First and foremost, an adult young people at the beginning of her or his independent life should cope with the huge number of public rules. For instance, people must pay a remarkable taxes for everything it increased the living costs and young people have difficulty to obtain enough money to pay for it. Netherless, in the past each person pay tax just on their incomes.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that today societies believe, governments rules and parents forces make limited young people choices to love and marriage. Most parents forbade their children to fall in love with anyone when they are in the middle of academic education because these parents believe that marriage avoids children from success in the future. In the past marriage with people from other countries was not a serious problem. Today's international laws to migration prevent marriage between different countries.
Finally, yet importantly young people are highly under the influence of their family. Unlike some American or European countries, young people in the Asian countries have not free to make a decision to themselves. Most families have traditional forms and decisions mainly given by older members of the family like grandparents or parents. This condition decreased the percentage of happiness in young ages people in Asian counties in comparison with other countries.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I convinced that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Because of plenty of daily rules that each person should overcome. International rules that limited young people choices to marriage with foreign countries and some traditional rites that control the young people live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tax'?
Suggestion: tax
... instance, people must pay a remarkable taxes for everything it increased the living ...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ople to follow and obey are too strict. Because of plenty of daily rules that each pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, still, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21148825065 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52676771372 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524804177546 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3085687891 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299933815713 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105397945905 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128824772174 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177704201436 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111052911911 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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