No one can deny that there are pros and cons of dwelling into the social media. There has recently been lots discussion regarding whether they affect our life or not. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely take a stance that social media has negative impact on our life. This is my firm belief that social media is not that much beneficial to our relationship because of number of reasons which I will develop my ideas regarding this context in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, social media circulates tons of fake news which creates adverse effect in our life. The truth is always behind the curtain but to get attention by the public, they distort the news and make them look so real which are not more than just a bogus one. As a result, public act believing that fake news but that creates problem in their life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, once I was planning to go outside the town for my job interview. Before moving I saw a news on facebook and the it was about the road condition that was blocked by the erosion. I relied on that news. As a result, I missed my interview and never got that job. For this it is clear, how a fake news on social media influenced from not getting a job.
Secondly, in this global world, social medias like facebook, tiktok, and so on are used as a show up. Many people doesn't present their actual condition but they only post a non-essential things just to impress other. As a result, the other person thinks his/her life worthless by comparing themselves with that seemingly attractive post which may even lead them to depression. For exam, one my young boy from my town was so my impressed by the post of his friend who posted his picture in facebook about his tour abroad. The young boy wanted same thing but he was to poor to afford that goes into so much deprresion. Later on, it was found that the boy who posted that pic was just taken into photo studio. From this , it is clear that how facebook may lead someone into depreesion.
At last, if you can you use social media effectively it may have some positive side as well. For example, some of students used messenger to send notes and to discuss about the topic. But for most cases they share lots of non-essential things like, pronographic content, pic about their non-healthly lifestyle and so on. Although social media can be used as a better resource people do not use it wisely. So, it always has negative impact on people's life and relationship.
In light to this above mentioned reason, I firmly believe that social media has only devasting impact on people's life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...r my job interview. Before moving I saw a news on facebook and the it was about the ro...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...ore moving I saw a news on facebook and the it was about the road condition that was b...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 748, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
...got that job. For this it is clear, how a fake news on social media influenced from not get...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o on are used as a show up. Many people doesnt present their actual condition but they...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...tion but they only post a non-essential things just to impress other. As a result, the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in facebook about his tour abroad. The young boy wanted same thing but he was t...
^^
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: TO_TOO[5]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... young boy wanted same thing but he was to poor to afford that goes into so much d...
^^
Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... just taken into photo studio. From this , it is clear that how facebook may lead ...
^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the students') or simply say ''some students''.
Suggestion: some of the students; some students
...ome positive side as well. For example, some of students used messenger to send notes and to dis...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41270065597 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50826446281 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8202489758 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1923076923 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208329604577 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613247894475 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717489087949 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132158630812 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801832520194 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...r my job interview. Before moving I saw a news on facebook and the it was about the ro...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...ore moving I saw a news on facebook and the it was about the road condition that was b...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 748, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
...got that job. For this it is clear, how a fake news on social media influenced from not get...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o on are used as a show up. Many people doesnt present their actual condition but they...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...tion but they only post a non-essential things just to impress other. As a result, the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in facebook about his tour abroad. The young boy wanted same thing but he was t...
^^
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: TO_TOO[5]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... young boy wanted same thing but he was to poor to afford that goes into so much d...
^^
Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... just taken into photo studio. From this , it is clear that how facebook may lead ...
^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the students') or simply say ''some students''.
Suggestion: some of the students; some students
...ome positive side as well. For example, some of students used messenger to send notes and to dis...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41270065597 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50826446281 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8202489758 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1923076923 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208329604577 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613247894475 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717489087949 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132158630812 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801832520194 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.