No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of the statement that to get succeed in a team one should grasp the criticism from others'. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely take the opinions from other and try to improve myself. It is my firm belief that taking others' criticism would help me on the best to develop myself for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, it is most of the time harder to know my own weak points when I am in team; which will always prevent me from getting a greater success. So, letting other people to decide and criticize about my weak point will definitely help me to upgrade myself. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, once I was engaged in a travel video-log where I was working as a video editor, director and content writer. Many of my friends and viewers used to criticize and comment me on my work. I used to take their opinion about my video-log and try to improve my ability on editing, writing and direction. As a result, I had a great improvement on every aspect of my video-log and loved by many of my viewers and I get about 17,000 subscribers within one month. For this reason, accepting criticism would help everyone to get success as I did in my video-log.
Secondly, letting other to judge your work may somehow drag you back. There are always not the case that people will give constructive criticism, but destructive criticism can also be the motivation for the personal success.
Drawing from on own experience, as being a physics lecturer, it was very harder to pursue my dream. I always wanted to be a physicist and become a lecturer in a college. There were the hard time in the middle of my study. Many of my relatives and friends used to get jealous of my hard-work for the reason if I get success. So, they used to demotivate me and give a negative criticism saying that studying physics is just s ruin of career. They used to say that physicist do not have good scope in Nepal. Moreover, they used to suggest me to take another options. But I knew that, these kinds of suggestions came out of their jealousy. This became my ultimate motivation and the kind of feelings used to came into me like, I need to show them, physics do have scope in Nepal as well and now I am well established. It's certainly clear that letting other to give a destructive criticism also help us to succeed.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that accepting others' criticism either it is destructive or constructive would ultimately help to get success in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...yself. It is my firm belief that taking others criticism would help me on the best to ...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...sons, I strongly believe that accepting others criticism either it is destructive or c...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52965235174 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59236151777 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470347648262 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1365132155 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2916666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12256376283 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038019673978 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369043230199 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080374537119 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184304589847 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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