Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? some adults want to get independence from his parents as soon as possible
Independence is an abstract notion in the mind of human being. Invariably all people in the world don't like to confine themselves to others. From this psychology, people want to live according to their own accord. But in the case of adults, this scenario is going to increment within a decade a lot. Consequently parental care, social boundaries are now very trifling to them. In reality, independent life without parents at the very beginning of adult age is a totalitarian concept. From these perspectives, I stand on the latter viewpoint for a couple of reasons.
To begin with, Parental care is the most adorable aspects of adult ages. It is a must for their proper nourishment. If an adult is bereft from parental care in this time, he will easily lose his track. Rather being in the parental atmosphere, he will be more co-operative and learn how he is nurtured by his parents. Surely, it raises his sense of humor to ponder over his parents. In the reciprocal scenario, if we look at the independent adult person, they lead their life without any care and decision. As a result, their growth and compassionate to the elders seem very poor. Moreover, their ill-nourishment paves a way to lead a disordered life. For instance, whenever I was in class ten, my best friend was kept himself aloof from his parents. As a result, his life was shattered, more often than not his time management, co-operation knowledge was very discombobulated. More importantly, it is said that he was in a fix and absolutely it was an obliterated life.
In addition, to be independent is not so easy for everyone. In the school and college life, it is hard to manage expenses with owns accords. Rather it is very difficult to some extent. Whenever a lot of pressure of repaying college fees, managing tuition, controlling expenses of daily's meal makes a huge burden to him, he easily treads his leg in an evil path. Consequently, his moral ethics goes to be a nastic one. Last but not least, his willingness to paving an illegal way makes himself an offender. For instance, my close friend who was very serious at an early age, his independent thinking makes him a rascal. This is only because of his inconvenience of earning money at this tender age.
Furthermore, independent life does not mean to lead one's life quite irresponsibly. Rather it inspires oneself to ponder over oneself and society's development. In the other way, it can be said that it makes ourselves to be responsible for our own works. Additionally, it does not mean to abscond parents. However living with parents, independent life is enjoyed with full of vigor. In today's world, man is very aware of one's choices and likings. In this case, parents don't bother to their children. Mostly they just mend themselves in a righteous way. For example, whenever I was in college, I was in a fix of getting severed myself from parents. In that case, I was just going to be addicted to wine. And parents were trying with their might and main to repack me. So independent life is not substantiated by so-called nastic works.
To wrap it up, it is required for young adults to familiarize themselves with the responsibilities they have towards their families which will only occur if they live with parents for longer times. Besides their life's meaning will be proved if they continue their adulthood in the right track in keeping a relationship with parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79931972789 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86075249794 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501700680272 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2629818833 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.55 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186899901856 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045711551029 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406403594426 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111515449364 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211147484504 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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