Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach people lessons about life.
As time passes and people become more developed, they become more aware of the importance of sport which plays a pivotal role in health. A plethora of people are in the conviction that sport teaches them lessons about life; however, some others take a radically different point of view and allege that sports just relax them and can teach nothing. I, for one, subscribe to the idea that sport train new thing about life to person who plays it. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned whit this issue that playing sports can teach people how to cooperate with others to win games. They can comprehend the significance of teamwork. By way of illustration, basketball have five members and every person in this group know if they want to be winner, they should trust each others and share ball, even if a player is full of skills. So, this can one of the aspect that we can learn from sport in our life.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that people can gain knowledge of sport, the important fact that under no circumstances should they give up. When people play sports, they often encounter the situation where they are down and the game is going to be over end. If they give up and do not struggle to win, they will definitely lose the game. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country, show that the most champions are successful in during their life since they usually insist on something that they want. Constantly, it is inspired from experiences that they obtain from sport.
In sum, one can surmise a conclusion that, playing sports is an integral part of our lives, and they affect us very much. Not only is it a relaxing and entertainment activity, but also teaches us many lessons such as comprehending corporations and teamwork, following their gold and insisting on something which they want. Therefore, I highly suggest that authorities, media and parent should put more emphasis on sport and effect on people‘s life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232227488152 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.168246445498 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0450236966825 0.0866891130778 52% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521327014218 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0758293838863 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125592417062 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0308056872038 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58838648548 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021327014218 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00473933649289 0.00188951952338 251% => OK
Determiners: 0.0758293838863 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284360189573 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0236966824645 0.0139019557991 170% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2212.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 377.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86737400531 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310344827586 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20424403183 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159151193634 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122015915119 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58838648548 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57824933687 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 67.1698895984 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9444444444 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6139460636 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.3688476275 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.312 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187676773718 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893835271658 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0516921535544 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531330662936 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0920208147488 0.151897553556 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982117018952 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16232336353 0.0781384742642 208% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305177307665 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0765298568741 0.067059652881 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247985065073 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.345166869174 0.0618886996521 558% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.