Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students should take at least a year to work or travel before beginning college Please use specific details and examples in your answer

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ork or travel before biginning college. in the following paragraph my reasons is p...
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...ndent that could resulted in self steem.I know some people may think that one or ...
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...pt the academic progress of student, but Secondly, working or traveling could bro...
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... working or traveling could brouden the students horizon. When students work or travel t...
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...ass. Beside this new perspective might effect on thier life. they might change thier ...
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...perspective might effect on thier life. they might change thier disisions about what...
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... subject matter they study in university Finally, it seems to me it would be bett...
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...o take a one or more year break and work or travel to be not onle independent but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80104712042 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36346700032 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0625632887 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221267595457 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952032268903 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583402498452 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116920624233 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667029336728 0.0645574589148 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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