Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Students should take at least a year to work or travel before beginning college?
Please use specific details and examples in your answer.
Nowadays there is a debate among people whether students should go to college directly after finishing highschool or not. But there is other idea which fits with my viowpoint that claims it would be more helpful for student to take a year to work or travel before biginning college. in the following paragraph my reasons is proposed.
First of all, taking one year to work or travel help student can be independent that could resulted in self steem.I know some people may think that one or tow year break might distrupt the academic progress of student, but
Secondly, working or traveling could brouden the students horizon. When students work or travel to different parts of the world they face with different culture or other thing that coudn't teach in any class.
Beside this new perspective might effect on thier life. they might change thier disisions about what subject matter they study in university
Finally, it seems to me it would be better for student to take a one or more year break and work or travel to be not onle independent but also to gain more knowledge and improve their horizone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80104712042 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36346700032 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0625632887 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221267595457 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952032268903 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583402498452 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116920624233 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667029336728 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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