Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Support your point with reasons and examples
Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
Childhood is definitely the happiest time of an individual's life.
To begin with, childhood is the tension free stage of our lives. We do not have to worry about making a career decision, financial expenses and marriage. We just have to worry about passing class tests,and playing games with friends. We do not have to undertake any burden or responsibility upon us. I still miss the time when I was ten-year-old. Life was so good and easy. I never had to worry about anything. It was fun to play out during the rainy season and make paper-boats. My life now is so stressed. I am constantly worried about my graduate admissions and financial expenses for the same.
Furthermore, children can live carelessly and make mistakes without having to worry about the consequences. It is easier as a child to get away from punishments and scoldings from parents. I would like to give an example from my personal experience. When I was a kid, I used to fight a lot with my elder sister. Many times, it would be my mistake but I never got scolded for it by my parents instead they would scold my sister and tell her that I am a kid and she should let it go. I used to get away with all that so easily. Truly, childhood was fun and the best time of my life.
Lastly, as kids,we were never expected to do anything but now as we grow old, we are surrounded by so many expectations that we have to think twice before making any decision. We cannot afford to make a mistake as it is not expected from us. All this creates so much pressure in a person's mind that he/she cannot make a decision just like when he/she used to as a kid.
In conclusion, childhood is much more easier and the happiest phase in a person's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...d is definitely the happiest time of an individuals life. To begin with, childhood is t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... have to worry about passing class tests,and playing games with friends. We do not ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to worry about passing class tests,and playing games with friends. We do not ha...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... tests,and playing games with friends. We do not have to undertake any burden or ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pon us. I still miss the time when I was ten-year-old. Life was so good and easy....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... was fun and the best time of my life. Lastly, as kids,we were never expected t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...est time of my life. Lastly, as kids,we were never expected to do anything but ...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...d. In conclusion, childhood is much more easier and the happiest phase in a persons lif...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...more easier and the happiest phase in a persons life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, still, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42271293375 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61248642728 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514195583596 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3283174344 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7272727273 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4090909091 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15780985322 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571270574439 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607081790617 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124636636274 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658651036817 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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