There are a lot of people who have various ideas about politics, economy, daily life and many other subjects. It would not be fair to ask them to share the same opinions with us since everyone has the exact rights to express their notions. Therefore, I agree the state that teacher should keep their toughts about political and social situations to themselves. I will explain the basis of my view in this following essay.
Humankind is a complicated creature. For example, a person may support an idea, ideology, organization, leader or else for a long time then he/she may change his/her toughts and start to be against them. I found these feelings and behaviors very natural cause I belive that people can cgange in time by means of spiritually, emotionally, economically, pyschologicaly and so on. It would not be fair if we ask people to stick to their first ideas forever. This changes are naturally valid for teachers, students and their parents, too.
In some cases, teachers and students parents do not share similiar opinions about many thinks and every family want to raise their children in the way they prefer since every family have their own truth however, children spend most of their time at school and consequently with their lecturers. Hence, the parents would not be happy to send their kids to these schools and they always be in panic and anger. A teacher must be trustful, ethic and honest with parents in oreder to give a sideless, good education. If a teacher supports an idea, group, organization and try to empose his/her considerations and beliefs to the students then this circumstance must be called as unethic.
Lastly, if a teacher shares his/her beliefs and toughts with his/her students then that teacher would manipulated those young minds. I cannot imahine anything worse than manipulating people because by doing this a teacher takes the right to decide from the students.
As a conclusion, a teacher must keep his/her ideas to himself/herself since every individual develop and change themselves in order to provide the students healty thinking environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...nd their kids to these schools and they always be in panic and anger. A teacher must be t...
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...circumstance must be called as unethic. Lastly, if a teacher shares his/her beli...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'manipulate'
Suggestion: manipulate
...is/her students then that teacher would manipulated those young minds. I cannot imahine any...
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... the right to decide from the students. As a conclusion, a teacher must keep his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, as for, as to, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0316091954 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72123098937 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57183908046 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8097767701 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179354150913 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590429539754 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518277690743 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988363055861 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468692706709 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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